In Kapit I think we need a sports stadium. Because at the moment we only
have a coupe of playing fields,and I think that a stadium would give a chance
for sport teams to play in front of a crowd,and they would get lots of local support.
I also think that if we had a stadium it would attract other people from other cities
or even countries! Not only could you have sports teams playing there you could
also host events there, like local concerts,galas and more.I think that a lot of people
would get alot of joy out of a stadium because we could have any types of sports
like cricket, rugby, soccer and at half time we could have local dance companies
come and even our gymnastics club could come and preyform.My last Idear is that
If we had the stadium it could also put alot of people in jobs because the stadium
would need lots of staff members for it to run. So I strongly believe that kapiti needs
this spots stadium because it would bring our community together!
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Score Reasons why you have given this mark
Ideas
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R4
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Because it had lots of ideas that connect to the topic with some extra information.
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Structure Language
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R3
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Because they used most of the right words to the type of writing.
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Organisation
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R4
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He put ideas in groups and order
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Vocabulary
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R3
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She uses a range of words and phrases to add detail
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Sentence Structure
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R5
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They can write most of my sentences correctly.
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Punctuation
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R4
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We mostly use full stops and capital letters.
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Spelling
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R5
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He spell most Essential list word correctly
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Total
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27
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