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In The holidays 3.4.19
The day before yesterday I woke up and the sun was beaming on my facec.My mum told me if I help with the wood she would let me go to Jonos house, so I helped with the wood.
First My mum told me to get ready but I was already packed. We hopped into the car and I said “where off” .
Finally We arrived at Jono’s house. When I got to Jonos house I saw rabbits everywhere, I ran over to the rabbits and I was patting them.
My back was getting sore so I asked Jono if I could go inside I walked inside and i asked Jono if i could go inside to Jono’s room and I put my stuff down. I saw his ps4 I asked Jono if I could play with his ps4 and he said “yup you can help yourself”. I went on to play gta 5 and me and Jono were playing songs and it was so funny because me and Jono was dancing to the songs and when we were done dancing to the me and Jono was taking turns who will die first I was happy with my day playing with Jono.
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