my river whiting

WILF:

• That i have interesting words in my sentence
• Sentences start with a capital letter

I have a full stop at the end

My sentences will be of different types of sentences.

 Kaikohe community pool

In our kaikohe community we need a pool at the skatepark. At the skatepark there are alot of children who run around and play on  their bike at scooter and get to hot. So the facility that is needed is a community pool. Why is a pool needed at the skatepark?

Firstly.  When we are at the skatepark people running around and get hot and they get dehydrated and there is no water fountain.  So if there was a pool we could cool down and wouldn’t be thirsty.

hSecondly  if there is a community pool next to the skatepark parents can teach their kids how to swim and so there might be less drownings in our community this would make everyone happier.  

 Thirdly we need a community pool by the skatepark so children will learn how to swim and know how to save someone’s life or their own life.

Lastly they need a community pool so parents don’t have to waste their money at Whangarei pools and travelling in the hot sun

In conclusion if we had a pool at the skatepark children would be safe because when they know how to swim they might be able to save someone's life or if they are in  danger in the water they will know what to do.

 Why are the police Needed

How do police defend their self  they defend Their self With a taser they have police dogs to smell the enemy down and  to make the enemy scared

If there wasn't police there would be robberies around the world And killing

We are lucky to have police in New Zealand.

If We didn't have the police there would be bad people running around the streets and people would be stealing People cars and carrying drugs around in there bag

how do Police take Enemys down they would truck them down with a trucking divisc or us a police dog too snife down the enermy

Why are the police important
Police are important because they saving  people's  lives by putting bad people away from them and they have there dogs to track them down.

 Firstly If we didn't have the police there would be bad people running around the Streets and people would be stealing people's cars  and Carrying Drugs  In there bags.

Secondly how do the police take the Criminals down
They take the Criminals down they have to defend the them and they take them down  by Using The tasers.

Last of all They look after the people who are in accidents and when they are hurt and they are good role models for your children And they might even help old  man cross the road.

 If there wasn't police there would be robberies around the world and killing we are Lucky to have police in New Zealand   

the tree hut treaty

  The Tree Hut Treaty

Firstly Whaea  Annie read the whole class a book about the tree hut treaty and then she  told us to draw our favourite part of the story and we draw our tree hut and then we had to color it in and after that we showed it to Whaea Annie.